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Haiku´s encadenados

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by cesarfco.cd, Nov 2, 2009. Replies: 7800 | Views: 262180

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  1. MASTER LY 22

    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Prudente huida
    del pequeño cachorro
    al ver al puma.    ​
     
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    MASTER LY 22, Jan 16, 2022
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Al ver al puma
    el conejo se esconde,
    la madriguera.    ​
     
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    La madriguera,
    las hierbas bien la ocultan.
    Cerca un topillo.    ​
     
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    MASTER LY 22, Jan 16, 2022
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Cerca un topillo
    está casi invisible
    entre los surcos.    ​
     
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Entre los surcos
    corre el agua regando
    las hortalizas.    ​
     
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    MASTER LY 22, Jan 16, 2022
  6. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Las hortalizas
    verdean en los campos,
    y aún es invierno.    ​
     
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    Y aún es invierno
    hilera de narcisos
    junto a la fuente.    ​
     
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    MASTER LY 22, Jan 17, 2022
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    Junto a la fuente
    la fila de mujeres
    cántaro en mano.    ​
     
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    Cántaro en mano
    la joven va a la fuente,
    alguien la mira.    ​
     
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    MASTER LY 22, Jan 17, 2022
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Alguien la mira,
    cosquillas en la nuca,
    presentimiento.    ​
     
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    Presentimiento.
    Las tórtolas auguran
    final feliz.    ​
     
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    Final feliz
    espera en las películas
    la solterona.    ​
     
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    La solterona
    su sonrisa perdió
    tras la ventana.    ​
     
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    Tras la ventana
    la luz del sol naciente,
    brillo irisado.    ​
     
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Brillo irisado.
    Va revoloteando
    un colibrí    ​
     
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    Pantematico Amargo el ron y mi antipática simpatía.

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    ese colibrí
    fornico rimbombante
    sobre un jacinto
     
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    Un colibrí
    de bello colorido,
    flota en el aire.    ​
     
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    No vale, no sigue el último verso
     
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    Pantematico Amargo el ron y mi antipática simpatía.

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    ese colibrí (5 silabas)
    un colibrí (4 silabas)
     
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    Flota en el aire
    una blanca pluma.
    Vuela una tórtola.

    ​
    Hola compañero te envié un mensaje privado explicandote​
     
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    Creo que Laly te puso un privado al respecto.
     
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    Vuela una tórtola
    del ciprés al farol
    junto a su amada.    ​
     
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    Junto a su amada
    pasea en bicicleta.
    Es primavera.    ​
     
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    Es primavera
    en las ramas del árbol
    primeras hojas.    ​
     
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    Primeras hojas
    en viejo limonero.
    Mañana fresca.    ​
     
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    MASTER LY 22, Jan 18, 2022
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    Tommy Traiga Invitado

    Mañana fresca
    escarcha en las orillas.
    Resbala un sapo.
     
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    Resbala un sapo,
    tarde de lluvia intensa
    trueno lejano.    ​
     
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  28. Tommy Traiga

    Tommy Traiga Invitado

    Trueno lejano
    ha sucedido al rayo.
    Brilló tu rostro.
     
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    Brillo tu rostro
    con rastro de una lágrima,
    la despedida.    ​
     
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    La despedida,
    corazón estrujado,
    los ojos húmedos.    ​
     
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