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One Last Chance

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Inferno du Doleur, Sep 13, 2009. Replies: 8 | Views: 1158

  1. Inferno du Doleur

    Inferno du Doleur Poeta adicto al portal

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    Stay with me forever,
    we could dance if you want to.
    Let me show you a wonderful night by my side,
    let me take you to the sky.

    For always and ever is always you,
    I’ll give you my everything, my love.
    Just give me one last chance,
    it would be perfect, like before…

    ...Love you to death...

    [​IMG]
     
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    Inferno du Doleur, Sep 13, 2009
  2. JOP PIOBB

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    Perfect your poem..Pretty, beautiful...very good your sensuality. I STAR U
     
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    JOP PIOBB, Sep 14, 2009
  3. Inferno du Doleur

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    Thanks Jop. I'm pretty sure you know about this issue...
     
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    Inferno du Doleur, Sep 15, 2009
  4. charo hdz barcenas

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    Give the lov 4 evr, Excellents verses, It was a pleasure 2 read u
    KiCs and Huggs
    :::hug:::
     
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    charo hdz barcenas, Oct 9, 2009
  5. Inferno du Doleur

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    Thanks Charis, I really appreciate your comment.
    :::hug:::
     
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    Inferno du Doleur, Oct 10, 2009
  6. natu

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    Wow! lovely words, make me feel in love
    Many hugs
    Natu
     
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    natu, Oct 11, 2009
  7. Inferno du Doleur

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    Thanks Natu,
    Hugs for you too.
     
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    Inferno du Doleur, Oct 11, 2009
  8. Mew

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    OhhOOoooooOOOOO
    Oh is a perfect poem.. love is forever is a magic mistery , s the chronicles of the death always the love present..
     
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    Mew, Dec 17, 2009
  9. Inferno du Doleur

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    Exactly, Alex, love is always a magic mistery. Thank you for being here.
     
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    Inferno du Doleur, Dec 18, 2009

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