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Melancholy of the Morning

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by JBR, Nov 3, 2009. Replies: 6 | Views: 906

  1. JBR

    JBR Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Melancholy of the Morning





    If the warm of your body
    it sheltered my hopes,
    would give all my life,
    for stay with you
    and sing you sweet praises.


    I am without you living,
    I am feeling sadness surrounding me,
    and the bitter tears
    that drop by your absence,
    each day drowning my soul
    flooding it of nostalgia.


    Expired every day for all of this,
    that expiry of pain,
    that my body back it dead,
    without a smile on her face
    without a sublime expression.


    That I do without you,
    [SIZE=3]If I waited much longer,[/SIZE]
    [FONT=Calibri][SIZE=3]I will continue waiting for your kisses[/SIZE]
    [FONT=Calibri][SIZE=3]or I am again to cry,[/SIZE]
    [FONT=Calibri][SIZE=3]o I will leave that pass life[/SIZE]
    [FONT=Calibri][SIZE=3]until that comes my end.[/SIZE][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT]
    [FONT=Calibri][FONT=Calibri][FONT=Calibri][/font][/font][/font]
     
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  2. Pemberley Winter

    Pemberley Winter Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Wooow!. that's was good, so sad though. May I ask why you put "derramo"?. Did you mean like "Drop"?
     
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  3. JBR

    JBR Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Thank you very Much for let me Know about the Word Derramo in my poem, it mean Drop, i apreciate it, and thank you for u coment, Greetings.
     
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  4. lore1

    lore1 Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Entiendo poco de inglés pero lo que he entendido me ha parecido muy bello. Saludos.[/font][/font][/font]
     
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  5. cesarfco.cd

    cesarfco.cd Corrector Corrector/a

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    Good lines JBR

    When you reach the end, so be it ... find you strong and happy.

    Greetings.
     
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  6. JBR

    JBR Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Muchas gracias amiga y poeta Lore1, agradecido por su comentario,saludos
     
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  7. JBR

    JBR Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Thank you fco, for the coment to my poem, greetings.
     
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