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The hardest thing to swallow

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by K-rolissa, Oct 25, 2008. Replies: 5 | Views: 1134

  1. K-rolissa

    K-rolissa Poeta reconocido en el portal

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    I’ve become aware that I’m enslaved,
    to the despiss of my mind.

    I have searched the corners four,
    forever there to find.

    A continent of bitterness,
    that I know for to share.

    In a tranquil view of happiness,
    that mankind doesn’t care.

    The air I breath is air for me,
    and only my space matters.

    Im living proof that all the world ,
    is fading in its sadness.

    Which by itself,
    itself alone,
    breeds guilt and hands of hollow.

    Madness is both pill and drink,
    the hardest thing to swallow.
     
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  2. Eugenio

    Eugenio Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Bello mi querida amiga, y no te respondo en inglés porque no lo he practicado mucho, pero si lo he entendio, eso creo.

    Siempre dejando algo de ti y algo para nosotros todos.

    Un beso

    Eugenio
     
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  3. K-rolissa

    K-rolissa Poeta reconocido en el portal

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    :::hug:::

    Gracias querido amigo, es un placer encontrarte hasta entre estas letras "extranjeras" :)
    abrazos...
     
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  4. Francisco Iván Pazualdo

    Francisco Iván Pazualdo Poeta veterano en el portal

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    Amiga pues igual se me complica el ingles pero si lo entiendo un poco me gustaron muchas partes de tu escrito si que en ingles haces tambien hermosa poesia un grato placer leerte besos amiga.
     
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  5. K-rolissa

    K-rolissa Poeta reconocido en el portal

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    Gracias Francisco!! un placer enorme siempre verte por aca...abrazos.
    :::hug:::
     
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    K-rolissa Poeta reconocido en el portal

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    Thank you Indra, I'm really glad that you've liked my writing, always a pleasure to see you here...
    :::hug:::
     
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